Obviously a lot of good points and issues I'm concerned with.
OTOH it smells a bit wrong. The imagery is too tied to the current US political experience.
Too focused on the "form" and not enough on the "content". I know this is something I'm guilty of too, asserting TheTopologyIsTheMessage
But surely not all Blue Churches or Red Religions say or mean the same thing. Doesn't it lose something important to lose track of the other factors influencing the content?